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I Need Another Try
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 02:28:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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" I Need Another Try "
I want to get to know you
more than just a friend
feeling deep sensations
my heart I let unbend
letting go of hurtful memories
the ones that make me cry
I let go of my past love
I Need Another Try
Falling deep in love with you
I need to let you know
I love you more than life itself
I'll never let you go
I sit while filled with wonder
pondering what will you do
I hope and pray you love me
as much as I love you!!!!!
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright 2007 James L. McHenry
Copyright 2007 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright 2007 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright 2007 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
Quote: The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Cant Be Seen Or Touched
It Must Be Felt With Your Heart
Quote: Poetry is "Not" a lost art. Poetry is better than ever. Of course you've got the usual gangs of idiots ( as the staff writers at "Mad" magazine used to call themselves) hiding in the thickets, folks who have gotten pretension and genius all confused, but there are also many brilliant practitioners of the art out there. Check the literary magazines at your local bookstore, if you don't believe me. For every six crappy poems you read, you'll actually find one or two good ones. And that, believe me, is a very acceptable ratio of trash to treasure. Credit: Stephen King in, "Everything's Eventual"
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MickeyPigKnuckles
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Re: I Need Another Try
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 08:15:50 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem here and you used the right animation to bring it out to its fullness...
God Bless..
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Re: I Need Another Try
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 10:35:00 AM AEST
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Masterful
Excellent
A very good flow..... |
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Re: I Need Another Try
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 12:03:31 PM AEST
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beautifully done
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Re: I Need Another Try
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 03:25:42 PM AEST
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Honey56, unknown_utopia, and vampirequeen, I want to reach back out to each one of you and thank you first for being my gifted friends. I also want to thank you for deciding to share a moment of your time to read and then leave me a little of you each through your heartfelt comments. I hold each one of you as my dear friends and always look so forward to being amongst so many talented people. Once again, Thank You.
Your Dear Friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: I Need Another Try
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:52:59 AM AEST
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How romantic and beautiful ..............
Dee xx |
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Re: I Need Another Try
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:53:27 AM AEST
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a very beautiful passionate heartfelt write
exquisite
vampyress Jenni |
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