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YOU!
Contributed by
lowman613
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Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When I was younger you wiped my face,
You cleaned my nose,
you socked my toes,
You gave me comfort in my place,
You brushed my hair,
you brushed my teeth,
you washed me with care,
bandaged me when I bleed,
You fed me when I needed to eat,
you dressed me as well,
picked me up when I fell,
Carried me when I had weak feet,
You did all of this & many more,
To show you loved me,
So its only fare to do those chores,
Thats my dying plee,
I washed you back because you washed mine,
I wiped you face & dressed you devine,
I bathed you when you couldnt no more,
Thats what a daughter is for,
I fed you,3 meals a day,
just like you did for me,
combed your hair,to show your beauty,
I did all the things you did for me,
To show you that I care,
helped you see what you couldnt see,
with alot of love to spare,
You were my mother,
You took good care of me,
So I felt I should do the same,
all I did couldnt keep you here with me,
I feel a little to blame!
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2003-02-26 22:20:00]
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Re: YOU!
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by venkat on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 01:33:00 AM AEST
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| A well drawn picture of a lovely mother and a loving daughter...there is no scope of any blemish or blame for you. venkat |
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Re: YOU!
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by renee on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 12:31:31 PM AEST
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that is a beautiful poem and you did what most people wont do anymore you took very good care of you mother and i know you hurt over her but one good thing to think about now is she is an angel now still watching over her baby girl you are in my prays.
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Re: YOU!
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 01:27:12 PM AEST
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Thanks Renee this really helped!
I did what any daughter should do for their mother !Christina |
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