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Circle of Thinking
Contributed by
brew
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Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 11:13:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Tears that flow within these eyes
No simplistic feelings, yet: Saddness
Tis heart has been hardened for a while
For now it grieves
Grieves for life
Hope
Looks deep for an answer
Is it what the heart wants and needs....
Maybe the answer has been found
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brew
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2007-04-30 11:13:09]
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Re: Circle of Thinking
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by Bloodydragon on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 11:42:56 AM AEST
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sometimes i wish i had an answer to life, but never found one, excelent write hit home for me, in some ways, i chose a dark path to walk which infects my way of thinking.
This really made me sit and think for abit, short yet powerfully voiced poem |
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Re: Circle of Thinking
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 11:45:30 AM AEST
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ANSWERS FOUND
THOUGHTS UNWOUND
FEELINGS OF PAIN
MIND INSAIN
ANSWERES WILL COME AND ANSWERS WILL GO
I'VE BEEN THERE DONE THAT SO I DO KNOW
GREAT WRITE HUN ......KEEP WRITTING YOUR FEELINGS
LUV YA
SCOTT |
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Re: Circle of Thinking
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 04:00:34 PM AEST
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Well i for one have no anwsers to anything.
Life is just
great job on this |
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Re: Circle of Thinking
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:39:09 AM AEST
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a very exquiste wise piece.. very powerful. yet so simple.. gives you something to think about.. exquisite!!
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Circle of Thinking
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 11:09:51 AM AEST
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Hi Brew" this is a hope filled write,
re-freshing read my friend. Vincent |
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Re: Circle of Thinking
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 11:55:27 AM AEST
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So sorry to read this saddness hope things get better. very convincing and filled with deep emotions.
Ben |
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Re: Circle of Thinking
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 12:58:05 PM AEST
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Oh hunni. . .this was heart-wrenching. The first stanza gripped the
heart and squeezed the most painful emotion from it.
But that second stanza is incredible. There is a triumph and
beautiful hope layered in each and every word. Hold on
to your conviction hun. Your strength will be answered.
As always, exceptionally provocative writing sweets.
PM me !!
*hugs you tight*
~Breezy |
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Re: Circle of Thinking
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 06:43:40 AM AEST
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I hope time enough has passed that you are better.
This was...is heart wrenching.
What an incredible font of emotion! |
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Re: Circle of Thinking
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 10:41:20 PM AEST
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You have captured that moment of sadness that has clenched our heart and squeezed out the last drops of hope and then again in the last line still, have one ray of hope left....Maybe the answer has been found.
As long as that last ray of hope lasts...anything is possible. My thanks for this inspiration piece. |
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