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Silent Darkness
Contributed by
Bloodydragon
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Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 11:23:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I want it so bad yetam slightly hesitant to start
My stomach is in knots hands shaking slightly
A sudden clatter of tins makes me jump and swivel
Only too see a tail as a rat scuttles away.
Above heated words thrown back and forth
Over nothing of importance just more crap
A reason to argue to hurt to what end?
Even I do not know the answer to that
Once my parents were as one then I dont know
He came home all flushed stinking of whiskey
No reason never a reason just screams and pain
Usually memore so her, I have forgotten how to care
I cringe as glass breaks a moan and finally crying
As he slams the doora roaring engine then silence
Safe for nowno such luck hell be back
No such profanity called safe in this hell
Even this basement isnt free of pain
Though I guess there is a difference
Well sometimes at any ratethe rare times
Day or night though I cant tell no light reaches me
He threw me in here so long ago to rotto die
She has kept me alive with scraps of food
In my prison now my home my grungy hole
If u look hard enough u can see the stained walls
Sometimes slip on something rotten and wet
A piece of me here and there as I linger on
Hunched I am now so many bones healed wrong
My screams never warrant any help only echoes
Now barely any whispers escape my worn out throat
How long have I been down here I dont know
Once I had friends now I have only my terror
And my slivers of broken glassmustnt forget them
Guess deep down they are now my family for I love them so
Somuch how they hug and caressnever complaining
Always so sharp and ready to play with me
To dance across skin leaving fine glossy trails
They love me so deeply carving their desires
Bringing a silent pleasure from lingering sorrows
But our play time is always interrupted by darkness
So weak so exhausted yet even though time seems to slow
My eternity never does always lingers on
Crimson tears are all that flow as mine are dry
I envy her for being able to cryto screamto escape
A door for her freedom if only she tried
A tomb for mine.where only death awaits
And darkness where fear resides
Where I lay seemingly
Forgotten
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Bloodydragon
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2007-04-30 11:23:12]
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Re: Silent Darkness
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by brew on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 11:28:42 AM AEST
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Um WOW.........something in the write that hit home....Deep and dark with so many feelings, that need to release.......WEll penned. Hope the darkness, will one day be light
Brew~ |
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Re: Silent Darkness
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 11:32:24 AM AEST
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This is a incredible write
well done...... |
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Re: Silent Darkness
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 12:04:56 PM AEST
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wow incredible deep write.
amazingly dark
i love it |
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Re: Silent Darkness
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 03:22:24 PM AEST
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it has always been hardest for me to comment on such lucid oration, not a simple composition- a poem with its own being, that breathes a life of its own, not one blemish within, a composition that there are not enough stars for in the sky
love n' hugs nessa
...for you some hashbrowns smothered in onions ....a few candles to write by ....and the blackest rose.....tossed into your grungy hole... |
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Re: Silent Darkness
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by brownsugar8272 on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:22:13 AM AEST
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| hey this was deep I see where you are going with this piece nice flow to this poem very dark and beautiful good work |
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