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Beautifully Lost In Confusion
Contributed by
jcanting
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Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 03:42:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Walking a lonely lifeless mile
Nonetheless with a bright smile
Two tried teary eyes
Look for hope in the skies
Delighted and dismayed
Like a string thats frayed
Outside armor strong as stone
But inside Ive been shown
A harmless flower sits alone
Bearing a much brighter tone
Loosely fitted emotional feelings
Many pointless daily dealings
Her cares come and go
Very quickly, never slow
Always her mind in a cloud
Just to make someone else proud
An adventurous life shell live
Only if she knew how to give
Forgetting all shes seen
But still very keen
She makes a new start
To mend a lost heart
But shell never know
If she shouldnt go
She strives to go far
And reach the farthest star
Wondering the workings of her mind
Shes truly one of a kind
Her reasons are always undefined
And end with never mind
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jcanting
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2007-04-30 15:42:42]
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Re: Beautifully Lost In Confusion
(User Rating: 1 )
by Nirvana12 on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 04:18:14 PM AEST
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| I think that it is wonderful, I really liked it |
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Re: Beautifully Lost In Confusion
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by Sasha on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 07:48:20 PM AEST
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| A very endearing write..keep up the good work.. |
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