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Don't Let It Be
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 02:32:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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" Don't Let It Be "
Here is my story
it happened to me
through this poem
I hope you can see
I fell in love once
and it really hurt
because after a while
I was treated like dirt
I fell in love once
I thought it was true
I saw their real side
and then I was through
Im trying to help you
not falling this day
sometimes its miss leading
in every kind of way
We may fall for looks
we dont look inside
this may haunt you
by what they hide
it can suddenly happen
they abuse you
then comes the beatings
what you going to do?
Their eyes soon aglow
so soft and tender
saying I am sorry
as now you wonder
your knees get weak
your heart beat stops
your mind is wondering
with scary thoughts
Your heart is screaming
that its not right
but through your eyes
a forgiving sight
your hearts now broken
you dont let it show
you say to yourself
this love will grow
Through this poem
Dont Let It Be
it could happen to you
like it did to me!!!!!
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright 2006 James L. McHenry
Copyright 2006 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright 2006 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright 2006 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
Copyright ©
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Re: Don't Let It Be
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:08:10 AM AEST
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Very beautiful poem...
Blessings To You & Your. |
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Re: Don't Let It Be
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by BEE on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:08:24 AM AEST
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Wonderful write very good with expressing the feelings. Take a look at some of mine
BEE |
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Re: Don't Let It Be
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:10:36 AM AEST
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| nicely done |
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Re: Don't Let It Be
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:22:52 AM AEST
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such a relatable piece here. it protrays the feelings of lost love or losing someone beautifully.. well said and very wisely written. beautiful job
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Don't Let It Be
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:39:32 AM AEST
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VERY NICELY DONE
A LOVE ONCE WHOLE
CAN BREAK THE SOUL
TY FOR SHARING
SCOTT |
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Re: Don't Let It Be
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:50:27 AM AEST
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Good to see you back ... and yet another heartfelt write for all to enjoy and relate to ....
I haven't experienced that kind of love.. but know so many that have .... Beautifuly worded as always
Dee xx |
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