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Whisky
Contributed by
whiskybear
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Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:01:03 PM in AEST
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oops
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I sit here by myself
holding a picture
of us in one hand
the other hand
I hold a bottle of whiksy...
As the tears come pouring down
I think what went wrong...
I had everything that
A girl could ask for
Now I'm lefted here
with just one thing
a empty bottle of
WHISKY!
Copyright ©
whiskybear
... [
2007-05-01 15:01:03]
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Re: Whisky
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by BEE on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 03:11:52 AM AEST
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Wonderful write very good with expressing the feelings. Take a look at some of mine
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Re: Whisky
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 04:25:32 AM AEST
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this is a very powerful yet sad expressive write. a great expression on how one turns to drinks to over come a problem but that never makes it go away. very expressive piece good job
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