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LOVE ME PLEASE!
Contributed by
ammalu
on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 08:12:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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AN EARLY BORN AND EAGERLY SHOWN
EVER CHILDISH NEVER FOOLISH
CHEERFUL, PLAYFUL AND WILLFUL
FOND OF MYSTERIES
FOUND TO BE MISCHEVIOUS
A SLIP OF TOUNGE AND A SIGH OF RELIEF
A BIT OF ANGER AND A BUNDLE OF THUNDER
A WANDERING LOOKS AND JUMPING HAIRS
A FUNNY SHOT AND SILLY THOUGHT
A MONGER OF DREAMS AFRAID OF DEEDS
ALL DEMANDS NO COMMANDS
A PET OF FRIENDS AVOIDS ELDERS
ALAS! SO MISERABLE, MOODY AND MOURNING PLIGHT
A CHILD TURNED TO BE AN ADULT
AT HUMBLE ,CREDIBLE AND NOBLE SIGHT
A WISHFUL HEART AND SUCCESSFUL FLIGHT
ALWAYS WHISPERS, SHOUTS AND PRAYS
ALL OF U " LOVE ME PLEASE!"
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ammalu
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2007-05-01 20:12:00]
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Re: LOVE ME PLEASE!
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by Ihop on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 02:37:55 AM AEST
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Your poem was very confusing. It was hard to understand. I think you were trying to go deep but you kind of drowned. Make your poems have One or Two meanings. Your poem has like 20. You confused me a lot.
If you need some help. ask me. |
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Re: LOVE ME PLEASE!
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 04:20:04 AM AEST
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a very well expressed piece on seeing through the eyes of a teen.. good write
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: LOVE ME PLEASE!
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by venkat on
Monday, 14th May 2007 @ 07:10:39 PM AEST
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What an excellent poem to describe the feelings of a (poetic) mother. though this is a short one incredibly beautiful and captivating.
Blessings to you and your girl.:-) venkat |
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