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From the hate and lies she gives
Contributed by
rhei76
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Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 09:40:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
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YOU THROW OIL IN THE WATER
ANGER TO FLOW THRU THE HEART
THE PAIN THAT YOU ARE ALWAYS RIGHT
SUCH A PRECCIOUS ******* VICTIM
IF I HAD A MATCH
AND THE LACK OF CONTROL
I WOULD SPIT IN YOUR FACE
AND BURN YOUR ****
TIL YOU NO LONGER HAD A SOUL
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2007-05-03 09:40:22]
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Re: From the hate and lies she gives
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by Sena on
Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 02:47:47 PM AEST
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| Oh Rhei...sounds like you're having trouble with someone. I hope things get better for you soon. Keep writing, it helps. |
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Re: From the hate and lies she gives
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 09:50:07 PM AEST
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Short yet powerful. Your feelings and emotions come off the page and shove themselves down the readers throat.. Well written poem. Hope things will get better..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: From the hate and lies she gives
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by runawaynameless on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 01:40:31 AM AEST
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| I dont understand that about her, but some people are just like that. I dont know what else to say about that. Im real sorry for everything that has happened this week. But hopefully I get to see you some time this weekend. =) |
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Re: From the hate and lies she gives
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by Ell on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 03:17:59 PM AEST
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| hey this is a good poem... i really like the shortness of it... its good to get straight to the point.... |
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