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Tears of Loss
Contributed by
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
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Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 11:10:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A simple thought now turned to gray
Minds simplicity now gone astray,
Thoughts uncovered when there's nothing else to do
Might as well be scared stiff then someone yells booo!
Scary to look way deep inside
Finding thoughts your mind likes to hide,
Some things are better off left for dead.
My mind now wanders uncovering dread,
Thoughts of lost children before they were born
Thoughts now leaving me broken and torn,
Tears now run down my aching face
Their feelings I cannot ever replace,
Remembering all the things that I wanted to share
But then emptiness, everythings bare
My thoughts keep me alive, I will have say
But I hate it when my mind goes far astray,
For my lost son that was to be names Deavon
I hope you are well, with God in Heaven
To my lost daughter that we gave no name
I wish you the best, I wish you the same.
God Bless You All, You Have Been Missed
Copyright ©
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
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2007-05-04 11:10:08]
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Re: Tears of Loss
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by Crow on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 02:51:56 PM AEST
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| I have daughters, and I could never imagine a loss as this...very heartfelt write. Vincent |
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Re: Tears of Loss
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 09:11:38 AM AEST
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ive got to tell you my friend, my heart cried with you when i first read this, you have written such a beautiful loving tribute for them, i am so sorry for your loss,
please forgive me for taking so long to come to it, my own life has had some resent events,
bless you and yours,
love n' hugs nessa |
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