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Night Gospel
Contributed by
needledancing
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Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 01:30:37 PM in AEST
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Fly me home to heaven lord I'm ready for the flight.
Fly me home to heaven lord the time is feeling right.
For if all we have is here and the feeling is the now.
Then I leave this earth and Lord I take a bow.
Fill me up with sunshine, cast your glow.
I must be better than you know.
Show me signs of grace.
I don't need to see your face.
I am sure I could meet you down below.
Fly me home to heaven lord I'm ready for the flight.
Fly me home to heaven lord the time is feeling right.
For if all we have is here and the feeling is the now.
Then I leave this earth and Lord I take a bow.
Filled with wisdom deep oh how I shine.
Light of all the heavens now are mine.
If you think me out of date, oh my lord we shall await.
We will wonder through it all just don't be late.
Fly me home to heaven lord I'm ready for the flight.
Fly me home to heaven lord the time is feeling right.
For if all we have is here and the feeling is the now.
Then I leave this earth and Lord I take a bow.
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Re: Night Gospel
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by Crow on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 03:12:15 PM AEST
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| the verses could be lyrics" good write, I like this. Vincent |
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Re: Night Gospel
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 03:33:35 PM AEST
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Quite beautiful, and pehaps a bit scary, i beleive this is all we have never the less a touching peice of widom to ponder.
Ben |
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Re: Night Gospel
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 10:36:33 PM AEST
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a beautiful song,
for a beautiful thought
i take a bow
the show is over
and i believe i did the best that i could
with your guiding light and love
let these words be acceptable
N.D. enjoyable read as always |
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Re: Night Gospel
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 05:32:35 AM AEST
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Wonderful work here ND! A great follow up to Bowl Full Of Gospel. I think it is just as powerful and leaves a great wanting for the reader. These words massaged my muscles, and allowed me to escape into the mood! Wonderful work!
BRAVO!
SCM |
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Re: Night Gospel
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 12:04:14 PM AEST
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ND .. a wonderful piece of work this. I'm with Vincent, I think
this very well could be lyrics. A sort of "night hymn". :)
I really like the repeated stanza. It adds to its potency.
~Breezy |
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