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The ‘I’ problem
Contributed by
girish
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Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 09:46:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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If one gets wounded people give First-aId
In the list of diseases first comes the AIDS
More effort is needed from the team to wIn
Effort put is least bothered if it has already won
Legs get pain if for long time one doesn`t sIt
Pain is not there if one has already sat
We don`t like any people who do sIn
Its essential for the earth to have the sun
People don`t consider a person if one doesn`t fIt
But they don`t bother even if he is very fat
Its essential for minds that they should bInd
There is not problem when the minds are in bond
I had to put hard work for me to LIve
But I did not have hardship with my love
When my friend wanted money I did not gIve
I did not reject the same when he gave
I had to bother much if I will get hIt
I felt it comfort to wear a hat
I had a great problem when I extended my LIp
But there`s no problem when its for the lap
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2007-05-04 21:46:05]
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Re: The ‘I’ problem
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by BEE on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 12:10:20 AM AEST
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