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Do You Care For Me
Contributed by
bruce
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Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 04:20:29 PM in AEST
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Do You Care For Me
In my mind, I often wonder
do you really care for me
I don't get the feeling it is
what I thought it should be
The love I had for you
was getting stronger every day
Until you very slowly
chased it away
No warmth from you
over a period of time
Like I had committed
some sort of crime
It hurt me more
as each day passed by
In my mind and heart
I tried to find, the reason why
I thought, i had showed you
how strong my feelings were
And how you were generating
A very special kind of stir
It really hurts me
the way it had to end
You are no longer there
to receive, the love I had to send
Copyright ©
bruce
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2007-05-05 16:20:29]
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Re: Do You Care For Me
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by emystar on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 04:24:10 PM AEST
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Awesome writing here.
good luck and good work.
Huggs,
emy |
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Re: Do You Care For Me
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by irodethetrain2u on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 05:27:24 PM AEST
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| gosh... that's exactly how I feel right now... |
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Re: Do You Care For Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 10:52:44 PM AEST
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Bruce, a very painful and heart-bled write. If this is personal,
I am sorry. Sorry that you (or anyone) should have to endure
the stain of a broken heart. It's one of the most agonizing and
gripping pains we, as humans, must face.
There is a certain, (albeit somewhat inconsolable) satisfaction
about penning the emotions though. You've done a great job
at exacting the torment felt. Hope it's better for you ...
~Breezy |
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Re: Do You Care For Me
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by jerseysue on
Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 04:16:44 AM AEST
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| Oh such a bittersweet heartfelt write. I know how this feels, and know how much it can hurt. Thanks for sharing such a good and heartfelt write. Sue x |
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Re: Do You Care For Me
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by shelby on
Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 06:31:32 AM AEST
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Oh Bruce this is so sad,
what happened to this lovely lady that you were speaking of?? Darn it..... Dont give up there is a lady for you my friend. If you need to talk I am but a pm away...
hugs
Michelle |
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