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Butterflies and Heart Melt
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 11:51:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I trusted you with everything
there is nary a thought I did not share
I truly believed in us
and it seems you didn't care
I lay may hands on every inch
of skin that covers your soul
Afraid of nothing with you
I felt our love truly whole
Your words were always truths to me
Only past demons could cause doubts
I lived and loved and dreamt with you
Our heads way in the clouds
When I held your hand, my love
deepest vibrations were felt
tremble of lips to lips, hips to hips
butterflies and the heart melt
I could lose myself in your blue pools
so lost in a paradise
when held by you my love
No other view by these eyes
Dedicated and devoted
a heart so strong and true
I wish you could of believed in me
for I believed in you
Penned 5-4-07
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2007-05-06 11:51:30]
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Re: Butterflies and Heart Melt
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by Crow on
Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 01:56:59 PM AEST
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| o`hon, this just tears the heart apart, I wish every good thing for you.. Vincent |
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Re: Butterflies and Heart Melt
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by Lessa on
Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 01:57:34 PM AEST
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i love this,
"I wish you could of belived in me
for i belived in you"
that line will stay with me forever |
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Re: Butterflies and Heart Melt
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by emystar on
Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 05:16:21 PM AEST
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Wow girl, whatever brought this on has created an awesome write even tho very sad.
Hope all is well with you-n-yours?
huggs, prayer, inner peace,
emy |
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Re: Butterflies and Heart Melt
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by Ruby2sdy on
Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 10:55:52 PM AEST
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Beautiful & Tragic... the last line is a clincher!
My heart melted reading this, can totally empathise with it,
Loved it, as usual,
2sdy x |
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Re: Butterflies and Heart Melt
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 12:35:00 AM AEST
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I felt the tears and pain within these words sis. I will forsure be calling you this week.
Wrapping my arms around you for a long distance hug.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Butterflies and Heart Melt
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 01:04:40 PM AEST
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beautiful from the heart poetry...
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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