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Ten
Contributed by
christie_1012
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Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 12:37:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It is more than control
It is more then the image in the mirror
It is more than he size on the tag
It is more then the pain
It is more then the tears
It is more then you will ever know
It is more then I can explain
It is more then you can comprehend
It is more then me
It is more then anyone can know
It takes your boy friend
It takes your friends
It takes your family
It takes your joy
It takes your hopes
It takes your passions
It takes your energy
It takes your dreams
It takes your personality
It takes your life
It isnt something you can control
It isnt something you choose to have
It isnt something you pick as a blessing
It isnt something you wish for
It isnt something you just get over
It isnt something you cure overnight
It isnt something you can stop
It isnt something you want
It isnt something you think is glamorous
It isnt something you brag about
It isnt something you wish on your worst enemy
It is me
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Re: Ten
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 03:56:11 PM AEST
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It's very sad and moving but u did a great job with this.
hang tuff, friend.
huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Ten
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by BigDre on
Monday, 5th July 2010 @ 02:44:28 AM AEST
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| I can feel your pain through this poem. In fact, I can feel the frustration you have of not being able to control this issue. Very sad, but very well written. |
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