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Georgia
Contributed by
Odessa19
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Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 01:29:33 PM in AEST
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SecretLove
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Sometimes I think of you. Often not the way I thought I would do.
Did I make it something else? What is my issue, if not myself?
Friends.
Perhaps too quick to sway, yet not completely fall.
Hmm.
Frequently I seem to mention it ALL. Not really.
ALL - of the little time it was.
Those are the ones not so easily let go of.
The ones taken or lost much to quickly and far too soon.
Yet the loss of humanity one feels for those whom they find themselves still stuck around.
The ones who have been there.
Yet no simple melody flows through my ears. Not to mention eight months of change.
So loved and adorned.
No not simple.
Not searching for more, but find it.
"More" can simply be seen for what it is, merely different.
Desire of change can ruin but also revive.
This exists in the person. Balance or lack there of.
Awareness, avoidance, and ignorant stones, allowing a bliss to stamp painfully into hearts.
Inherent joy coming from utter surprise.
Shock-delight. Frustration forever-manipulation.
Heedless perception. Perceptive like thou.
Relative irritations proving jealous of sponenauity.
Brought on by blind sight from the heart.
I hope to meet you again. I hope you will know.
Ask less and do more to get what you want.
But to keep it...... well that is why the wind blows.
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Re: Georgia
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 10:28:42 PM AEST
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| 19,, this deserves much more than I can give it, very insightful write. excellent read and work. Vincent |
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Re: Georgia
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 08:09:39 AM AEST
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I believe this is the first I have read of yours and by the looks there is a talent to be sought here. I hope to read more! This was quite good and poetic. Headless perception, perceptive like thou....brought on by blind sight from the heart. Wow a tremendous job! Looking forward to more!
BRAVO!
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