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The Film 4307 – 41107
Contributed by
zeldianus
on
Thursday, 10th May 2007 @ 09:35:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A film has covered my eyes;
But it comes as no great surprise
As I cannot see the color from the suns rays
Only the varying grays.
My life has led me to this road:
One that devils had no need to goad
Me in taking;
This path is from my own making.
I am a failure: profound and true;
I need no reminding; its nothing new.
Always trying to progress
But finding myself more and more in distress
I fall back and back
With never a moments slack.
How can they expect me to succeed
Or even to proceed
When my sight is lost and I cannot see?
All that I dreamed, now, will never be.
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zeldianus
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2007-05-10 09:35:16]
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Re: The Film 4307 – 41107
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by Caz on
Thursday, 10th May 2007 @ 08:51:21 PM AEST
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| wow, that is pretty damn good. In parts of it i can relate... I looove the words you have used to ryhm also. Great peice. =D |
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Re: The Film 4307 – 41107
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by justagirl82 on
Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 04:03:05 AM AEST
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| What else can you do but prove them wrong? My advice, fight until your last breath for everything you don't or can't have. Good Write. Thank You! |
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Re: The Film 4307 – 41107
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by Smigit on
Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 05:32:30 PM AEST
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| I usually don't enjoy 'A' 'B' ryhme schemes but, you pulled it off. It's nice. |
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