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I lie still
Contributed by
kristin
on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I lie still as your forceful ways abandon my mind I try not to move as your fingers find their way around my unknown body reaching deep within my soul my eyes dare not open all I can do is cry if I were to scream you would be the last I would ever see in my mind I wish to run away hands at my sides, streams of blood leave me hopeless why do you hurt me so? the tender touch I had wished to feel will never hold me again I am so ashamed at the end you had walked away with my innocence of which I had wanted to keep pain too much to bear on my own I lie still on the dark stone embankment crying as though I have nothing left but shameful wounds and scars H-E-L-P spoken so lightly the breezes sweep my words into the air still watching the streams of blood flow down through the rocks and into the water minutes later have seemed like eternity pulling my sore body over the gravel and onto the pavement I lie still calling your name with the little voice I have left my eyes close and the night takes me within its arms time slowly passes and I do not wish to move, I cant why me precious world? time leaves me behind I will never taste your kisses or feel your angelic touch hear your soft spoken voice or live to hold you in my arms instead I lie still
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2003-02-27 08:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I lie still
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 10:51:48 AM AEST (User
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AHHH Such a really touching peice so full of
emotion! Great write! Christina |
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Re: I lie still
(User Rating: 1 ) by WordPoet on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 04:26:32 PM AEST (User
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After reading this I find myself emotionally shredded and sympathetic. The words disply such vivid and deep emotions.
Good write. |
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