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Rise
Contributed by
honey56
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Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 11:01:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Here feeling down and quite blue
Counting backward from 10 to 1
Trying to think of a reason to
Make me smile
To make my life a little more
Colorful and a whole lot less
Blue..
If I could just rise
Rise above it all..
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honey56
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2007-05-12 11:01:56]
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Re: Rise
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by zenith66 on
Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 11:12:04 AM AEST
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| loved it, last few lines really got me.. well done freind |
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Re: Rise
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by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 12:34:50 PM AEST
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Sorry your feeling down my friend if it's any constellation beleive it or not i have those days my self. Beautifuly expressed though thanks for sharing that may help some one else know there not alone.. hope you feel better soon.
Ben |
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