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Untitled
Contributed by
greeneyes23
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Sunday, 13th May 2007 @ 07:44:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You never know what you have until its to late
Once youve relized theyve closed the gate
The ones you love never knew how you felt
They only saw the cards that you dealt
But you always keep the best cards in your won hand
And try not to show them as best you can
Somethimes though you catch a case
Dealing again you forfeit an Ace
Always keeping another up your sleeve
Its kinda hard to love when no one beleaves
And when its all over you deal them all out
Only until then can you know what I'm talking about
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2007-05-13 07:44:36]
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Re: Untitled
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by andrewjones12 on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 06:51:25 AM AEST
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interesting, the stlye was nice, and it(my take) tells of presenting love but not feeling it as the other presented. or something along the lines of that.
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