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Sunrise Heart Beat
Contributed by
Jester
on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 09:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Turn around and see the sunrise
stand with me forever init's warmth
and when the dusk comes
watch with me it's technicolour beauty
stay with me in the chill of the night
I will keep you warm
make you feel safe in my embrace
but you must want to be here
sharing my dreams in a heartbeat
or would you push me away
if I where to embrace you
turn away if I where to kiss you
refuse me if I asked you to dance
I will not tell you that I am good
or that I am right
all I can offer are things that you can get elsewhere
all I can give are things you don't need
only if you can see inside
past the pettals of a dieing rose
in to it's core knowing that it will be reborn
find me in the off note played on a guitar
not perfect and beautiful
but the sound of a learning child
for I want not to be perfect in your eyes
as I will then have nowhere to grow
I don't wan to be the best
because then i can only let you down
embrace my faults
kiss my fractures
and stand with me forever in a sunrise
Copyright ©
Jester
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2003-02-27 09:40:00]
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Re: Sunrise Heart Beat
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by WildFire on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 08:48:17 PM AEST
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| that is such a beautiful poem. keep up the great work |
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Re: Sunrise Heart Beat
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by Tanna on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 01:35:48 AM AEST
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| YAYYYYY !!!! You did it! :) This is absolutely beautiful! I'm glad you got off your you -know-what, and started writing again ;) Looking foreward to more ~ Tanna |
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Re: Sunrise Heart Beat
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by Jester on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 07:32:43 PM AEST
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| thank you, much appreciate people wreading my work and definatly the positive feed back |
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Re: Sunrise Heart Beat
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by Jester on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 05:28:02 PM AEST
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| Not sure wether mesa replied to this previously but probably not, my brain has slipped in to nuetral, but it's all good. Thanks for the compliments Tanna, I will get around to putting more up, but at the moment at a tad tired and confuised about stuff so it might be awhile before I post another but not too long |
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