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Sweet Simplicity . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Monday, 14th May 2007 @ 05:59:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Two lips
upon one coffee cup
our morning game we play,
cream and surgar with a kiss
were now each other's
day.
Two sleepy heads
that share one pillow dreaming
cheek to cheek,
two heart's entwine as though a willow
such tale's of love they
speak.
You are my sweet simplicity
the nector
in love's flower,
a moment's love i'd share with thee
before another's
hour.
I call you
sweet simplicity
you are my gentle fawn
as pretty as a twilight rainbow
smilling 'midst the
dawn.
You who took me
by the heart as gentle
as could
be,
unto
my soul your love impart
thy sweet
simplicity.
Ben
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Re: Sweet Simplicity . . . Ben
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by needledancing on
Monday, 14th May 2007 @ 12:03:40 PM AEST
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I can only wish that a loving heart would one day write a piece like this for me.
It is filled with love and the passion that I interpret as complete as one could be.
A fantastic piece my friend. |
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Re: Sweet Simplicity . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 07:21:12 AM AEST
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this is my new favorite of your exquisite love poems, i love the old world element, i would say perhaps to another writer, 'where-ever your inspiration comes from keep feeding that muse' but, to you ben, i say, give her a hug from me, you make people want to run wild and pick daisys
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Sweet Simplicity . . . Ben
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by MisfitMe on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 08:01:36 AM AEST
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The inherent peace of this kind of simplicity is something I desperately want for myself & have at times experienced...still questing for my quiet mind, though...
"And be a simple kind of man
Oh, be something you love and understand"~Lynyrd Skynyrd
Good Stuff, Huh!!!
~me |
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