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Don't Cry Wolf
Contributed by
needledancing
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Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 01:45:22 PM in AEST
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Don't waltz away the hours of my day
Don't bend the feelings I have for you I say.
If you need me I am there,
Dont take words and call despair.
Damn the caring that I feel right now for you.
I'm rendered most insane,
When I suffer all your pain.
The words of self destruction tear my soul.
Leave me deaf and leave me blind, leave me whole
Yet not behind.
Damn the feeling that you grab right from my heart.
As much as I chose love,
There are others up above,
Who would say that soul was wasted once again?
The thorns of one another,
Has lost another brother,
The end result is always born of pain.
The injustice is the burden that I'll wear.
Copyright ©
needledancing
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Re: Don't Cry Wolf
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 02:09:37 PM AEST
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The pain of sorrow is very beautifully visualized in this poem.
My friend if sorrows are here can joy be far behind.
Take care my friend.
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Re: Don't Cry Wolf
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 02:18:20 PM AEST
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Hello my friend,
I know eactly what you mean. Sometimes I just have to shut down my computor 'cause of pain of others.
Great work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Don't Cry Wolf
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 02:54:04 PM AEST
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OMG I just posted something so similar,
Life seems to be wrapped in sadness so heavy it is hanging in the air... confusion at every path. I have read that there are people who are called sensitives who actually can take on all the emotions of the world and goings on around them..... I think that would be me, sounds like you have some of it to.
Sad thing is my plate is heaped so high with my own garbage is hard to manage more pain, if that makes any sense I dont make sense tonight lol.
I hope your ok.....
Another wonderful write, I enjoy your talent, wisdom and tenderness.
Michelle
who is trying to cleanse her aura of everything arghhhhhhh |
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Re: Don't Cry Wolf
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by GemmaLouiseRose on
Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 10:12:41 PM AEST
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| flows like the blood in your veins im sure, so easy for me to relate. xx 4* |
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Re: Don't Cry Wolf
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 04:30:36 AM AEST
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wow this is so sadly written but so expressed well. Life does seem to have endless trials of sadness at times but that is where we find our greatest strength and realize that we have more hope and can achieve what seems impossible in those times.. this is such a heart felt piece. great job
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Re: Don't Cry Wolf
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by scrivonel on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 12:55:06 AM AEST
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Well expressed poem.
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