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Red
Contributed by
Lo26810
on
Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 09:45:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Across your messy sheets,
Behind the lips on your face,
My innocence danced,
And soon was misplaced.
I've been hiding a while,
Behind solemn green eyes,
Believing nothing in my heart,
But your humble replies,
As I go on with routine,
And a life you despise,
I plead with you,
For my sanity,
While still guitly,
Of birthing these lies.
With convicting red hands,
I play on in this game,
Hoping that nothing will come,
Of this heart I can't tame.
I have broken things down,
Only to survive once again,
But nothing I have done,
Has brought resolution in the end.
Copyright ©
Lo26810
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2007-05-17 09:45:37]
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Re: Red
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by GENXTRASPECIAL on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 02:52:18 AM AEST
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| decent but very vauge and abstract. Also might want to work on your line breaks. :) |
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Re: Red
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by jecox on
Monday, 1st November 2010 @ 11:00:37 PM AEST
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| i think its beautiful. very abstract, but thats poetry. its supposed to make each person feel something different whcih you do quite well. i think its great |
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