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Tear Drops
Contributed by
scrivonel
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Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 11:54:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Tear drops on fire
Burn through her soul
Tear drops on fire
Never leave her alone
Through the night she dreams
Of lonely nights she feels
And in her mind it comes
The sound of distant drums
They call out her name
And they seem not to whisper
They detail a memory of coming
But they seem not to come at all
What is it that they say
Can they release her in a way?
Can they fill her with a new life
To breathe in her lonely nights?
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scrivonel
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2007-05-17 23:54:14]
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Re: Tear Drops
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 12:00:26 AM AEST
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Well written.. I like how you expressed thoughts and emotions in this poem.. great job..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Tear Drops
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 02:00:14 AM AEST
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I liked this poem. Each stanza left me with something amazing. The second stanza my fav....with "the sound of distant drums" . I could hear their rhythm. The ending stanza was nice with the questions. (I hope the answer is yes). Thanks for sharing.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: Tear Drops
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by zenith66 on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 11:47:38 AM AEST
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| Holy hell this is brilliant, i love it, like reading a story and i love your imagery and use of languge.. very well done freind... |
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Re: Tear Drops
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by needledancing on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 03:16:23 PM AEST
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| A wonderful write catching the lonely and questioning soul within each and every being. |
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