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Vagaries Of Perception
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 04:34:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Dancing where young shadows lie
Like silhouettes of silent wry
A sleeping king in yonder dreams
Where light is played and music gleams
To falling clocks from clouds sublime
Perception held in captive time
As vague as thought we enter sleep
A crawling note, from sounds we creep
Inclined by depth our hearts afoot
A paradox that one wont put
One flame to float where waters kept
A watered death where flames once slept
Illusions found where humans live
Vagaries we wish to give
Judgements made by worded bliss
Connective Meanings where we miss
An intellect, to fathom why
Existence lost, a sound goodbye
So in dreams where clocks will fall
Where music gleams and light will call
The key to fate is in your mind
Locked away, enwrapped entwined
Decide your fate, illusion true
Let your dreams consume, imbue.
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Re: Vagaries Of Perception
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 05:25:12 AM AEST
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wow a very enlightening piece.. I love the flow of this and the wording is exquiste. this sounds like it belongs in one of those fairytale movies as a song .. nicely done
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Re: Vagaries Of Perception
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by Honey56 on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 11:36:52 AM AEST
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An excellent write..
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Re: Vagaries Of Perception
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 11:42:05 AM AEST
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luke i remember this one, i say still it is exquisite, which id bet money is what i said the first time i read it lol, this is sooo beautifully written, i absolutely love your style, flow and respect your talent, fabulous poem!
love n' hugs nessa
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