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This Feeling
Contributed by
Monochromatic
on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 04:15:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This Feeling
What is this feeling?
It can hurt
It can burn
It can comfort
It can be cold
It can be warm
It can be deceiving
It can make you happy
It can make you sad
It can make you alive
It can heal
It can die
It can destroy
It can be blinding
It can be amazing
It can be dazzling
It can make you cry
It can make you laugh
It can make you crazy
It can be lost
It can be found
It can be renewed
It can be controlling
It can be twisted
It can be poison
It is Love
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2007-05-18 16:15:50]
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Re: This Feeling
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by richcol7522 on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 05:09:05 PM AEST
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The ending brought the whole write together. And I couldnt agree with you more...You did a pretty good job for your first try. Gets better with practice.
Good job
Rich |
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Re: This Feeling
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 05:39:41 AM AEST
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| Excellent write... |
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Re: This Feeling
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 08:12:02 AM AEST
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Nice verse on the diversity of love , wise as well. Put together nicely
~MIchelle~ |
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