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Incandescent
Contributed by
Loende
on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 07:53:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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The seams feel stretched,
like the repairs wont hold.
Too many patches in too many places
Vital places.
What do I do?
How can I re-enforce,
Without the necessary materials?
I cant unravel again,
cant and wont live that way,
But already Im turning counter-clockwise,
slow steady steps.
The beginning of a deadly dance.
Why love?
Why breathewhy dream
Why write?
Because it is the kindled hope,
Of a world gone utterly mad.
An incandescent page,
That makes the imaginary real,
Even if its only for a moment.
These sparks are few and far between now.
Already I am drowning
The repairs wont hold.
Copyright ©
Loende
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2007-05-19 07:53:03]
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Re: Incandescent
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by Bleedthelove on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 08:50:16 AM AEST
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| I really really like this poem. Excellent job. |
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Re: Incandescent
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 08:57:39 AM AEST
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Pleasure is mine for reading this, did a super job
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Incandescent
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 10:03:15 AM AEST
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I loved the title and the write. I really dug the questions that you asked in fourth stanza and the answers you give in the stanza after. I can relate to your write. Wonderful piece.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Incandescent
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 11:22:52 AM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings, well woven words,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Incandescent
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 09:58:21 AM AEST
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an interesting poem. i particularly liked this bit:
Because it is the kindled hope,
Of a world gone utterly mad.
An incandescent page,
That makes the imaginary real,
Even if it’s only for a moment.
world class. |
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