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the temptation
Contributed by
judasman
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Sunday, 20th May 2007 @ 10:39:26 AM in AEST
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alone at night i fall
succumb to the temptation
my life is suffering
as are those around me
i hold myself
to stop myself
rocking gently back and forth
wanting to be free
i look and see
what i once was
but now nothing
emptiness
alone at night i fall
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Re: the temptation
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by scrivonel on
Sunday, 20th May 2007 @ 05:24:08 PM AEST
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Simple and effective, good write.
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Re: the temptation
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by shelby on
Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 04:06:36 PM AEST
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A good write said mountains and spoke volumes in a small space
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