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Where the Road Falls
Contributed by
joelmuses
on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 02:42:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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A cold indifferent wind, yet
Of cool assurance
Brushes the tips of the leaves
And they, who do not stray
From their tree hold
Firm in natures resolve
A road; bent and narrow
Winds to the disillusion
Of its mountain path
And the road, not content
With its course meanders still
Into oblivion
Who is to say the path ends there?
The mountain does not
In its quiet apathy
Who is to say the path ends there?
The trees do not
In their tranquil carelessness
They mark the point
Of all creations thought of
The horizon where the road
Falls
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Re: Where the Road Falls
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by Tradition on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 08:53:37 PM AEST
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| Not bad at all.....keep it up! |
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Re: Where the Road Falls
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by brew on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 09:49:09 PM AEST
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I liked it alot.Im all for free verse, it allows the exploration of ones'inner, depth. Great job......Keep posting and ty for the comment on mine.
Brew~ |
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Re: Where the Road Falls
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 03:13:03 AM AEST
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I love free verse. Words don't seem to be so confined. (not that I don't love other styles of poetry as well). You brought many beautiful images to light here. Well done.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Where the Road Falls
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by 5MinutePoet on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 12:03:43 PM AEST
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| not bad, i see tinges of religion, mourning and sorrow if not confusion in there, it's very busy in it's understatment. Though i do prefer a stronger rythm a flow. But keep trying and find what you're looking for |
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