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Star of Gold
Contributed by
michaeljordan1635
on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 09:18:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As I pondered at the clear night sky
a shooting star came whizzing by
a start so beautiful, with so much grace
it brought back memories of an unrivaled face
A face that was lost in space and time
a face that was elegant, perfect and fine
Just like the star this face was dying
wrapped up so perfect and peacefully lying
i loved it so much my heart did tear
that last time I saw her gorgeous hair
how could heaven ever dare
to take a face so perfect and fair
and now like that star it is gone out of sight
the face had stop living, gave up the fight
and as I once more pick up my basket
I once more see the covered casket....
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2007-05-23 09:18:33]
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Re: Star of Gold
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 12:48:48 PM AEST
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wow im sorry to hear about your losses.. but this is a beautiful emotional write. so well penned out and welcome to the site.
remember that they are watching over you now so they are always with you .. beautiful write
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Star of Gold
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 01:17:08 PM AEST
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So sorry for your loss. You wrote a beautiful poem here and when you look to the stars know they are looking down to you smiling.
Michelle |
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Re: Star of Gold
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by slay797 on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 06:36:01 PM AEST
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| im sorry for your loss.... awsome poetry, i hope you find some piece of mind in it |
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