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Warm
Contributed by
crow
on
Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 01:28:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Time passes
Winters to Summer
days go by
before one" can get warm.
How should I put this
without sounding worn..
nothing was perfect
nothing is now..
Stuck in the mire"
end of the chain.
god" I wish..
freedom you seek
just a dream.
What you are made of,
rules and wants"
there is always
the punishing time...
No-where else to return
constant hunger contained
It would amaze what for... Vincent
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2007-05-25 13:28:09]
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Re: Warm
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by eckenrode on
Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 01:34:05 PM AEST
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| I really like how this poem sounds its very verbal |
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Re: Warm
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 06:38:29 PM AEST
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the underlying message deeply relays a strong silent longing, such beautiful expression of feeling here,
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Warm
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by shelby on
Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 11:14:10 PM AEST
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IM glad I found this this morning, loved the message. Sorry I missed ya.
Michelle |
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Re: Warm
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 12:13:49 AM AEST
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Well written and if I need to say,all your work is excellent..
I read your post everyday..Grreat work...
C.S |
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Re: Warm
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 03:51:30 AM AEST
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I've missed you and your writes. This is another one of those writes of yours that uses brevity of words to say so much. The feeling was heavy reading it. It seems to have so much retrospect in it, making me long somewhat for days gone by. I really loved the last lines...
"No-where else to return
constant hunger contained
It would amaze what for..."
Thank you so much for sharing pieces of you.
Much peace and love,
Laura |
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Re: Warm
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 10:40:21 AM AEST
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wow Vincent! Incredible!!
This, my friend is an enormous thought provoker. Wow again.
I adore your word choices ... they say just enough to allow
the reader to think and read and think some more. That's one
of the things I love most about your poetry. You have such
an ability to put thoughts into my head that make me stop
and wonder .. ponder ... and even dream a little.
Excellent write.
~Breezy |
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