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When is enough
Contributed by
eckenrode
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Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 01:39:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When can I say
it is enough
With the hand I was dealt or the one I made
When will all the goals Ive set be complete
Its like a infinite grocery list.
When one page market off
Then theres another to replace it ...... and another...... and another
When will I ever be at peace?
With everything I could be better at mocking me.
And so I wonder, Will one day I be that old man
With a dull eye and a cracked face,
Regretting what I might have done
Fearing the death, of my uncomplete
life
J.L. Eckenrode
Copyright ©
eckenrode
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2007-05-25 13:39:46]
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Re: When is enough
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by Chamaron on
Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 01:46:07 PM AEST
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| This captures the idea that it's just one thing after another, that there's always something to be done... but sometimes you just have to sit back and relax and draw your own "enough" line. Great job. |
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Re: When is enough
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by madhusudan on
Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 12:05:32 AM AEST
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| Excellent read...life is our biggest reality show... |
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Re: When is enough
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by Crow on
Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 01:39:31 PM AEST
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isn`t this the truth, when is enough .. "enough
sometime I think its not what we gain, but the fight getting it... what addiction that can be.
good work and read. Vincent |
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