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DeAR dr.
Contributed by
teagy03
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Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 08:29:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Dear Dr,
My skin, looks torn and broken,
people look at me in disgust,
it was just no fault of mine,
it was in the doctors we all trust.
i was sick for days and days
needing help beyond compare,
i went and saw the evil one,
and they just didn't want me there.
In such a situation,
you would think the answer would be found,
but the only way i was helped,
was when i was nearly not around.
heart palpating in my chest,
i could nearly see the light,
please mum, just dont let me die,
i asked her to aid my plight.
in the ambulance i did go,
and when i reached the end,
the evil one who sent me away,
asked why i was here again.
i was rushed into the city,
lost half my arm and leg,
was on life support for long enough,
and had a long, hard treck.
i had to learn to walk again,
to use a fork and knife,
all because of the doctor,
who didn't value my life.
I still have trouble walking,
and i cant use my arm,
but the doctor is still working,
after he caused me all the harm...
~I HATE YOU~
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teagy03
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2007-05-26 20:29:48]
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Re: DeAR dr.
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th May 2007 @ 12:13:09 PM AEST
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This is so sad but written well.
I'm so sorry for your inner pain.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: DeAR dr.
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by Sena on
Sunday, 27th May 2007 @ 02:57:40 PM AEST
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| good expression of what you endured. I can really relate to everything you've been through...especially with the dr's and being hospitalized. I hope things get better for you soon. Thanks for sharing. |
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