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3:37 a.m.
Contributed by
israpon
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Sunday, 27th May 2007 @ 07:58:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Every muscle in my body aches,
My fragile bones never cease to shake.
Sleep has never came easy to me,
These rampant thoughts keep plaguing me.
Endless questions with no answers.
Like a novel with it's last page missing.
My eyes continue to grow moist and puffy, bags starting to sag down my cheek bones.
3:37 a.m. its mornings like these that I've never felt so alone.
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israpon
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2007-05-27 19:58:13]
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Re: 3:37 a.m.
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by Spike on
Sunday, 27th May 2007 @ 08:43:02 PM AEST
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israpon,
an intense and impressive first entry. You can feel the wearisome sadness in every line.
welcome to YPDC,
Spike |
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Re: 3:37 a.m.
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by Suzanna on
Sunday, 27th May 2007 @ 10:48:00 PM AEST
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Hi Israpon,
This is a great poem, I think you express the illness wonderfully although I wouldn't know how it feels...
emm... welcome to the site!!! I hope you have plenty more poetry to share!
Nicole.x |
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Re: 3:37 a.m.
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 01:29:00 AM AEST
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great first write, funny thing, i used to wake up at 3:37 in the mornings lol, still your basic night owl:) ...poetry writing is like a window carelessly left open; that small hardly noticed breeze blows forever across ones soul,
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: 3:37 a.m.
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by shelby on
Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 03:42:02 AM AEST
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I felt this sadness. Welcome to ypdc....
I will send the dream man to sit at your bed.*winks*
Michelle |
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Re: 3:37 a.m.
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 08:22:57 AM AEST
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I enjoyed your write..
Nice I most say!
C.S |
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Re: 3:37 a.m.
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by eckenrode on
Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 01:17:56 PM AEST
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| great poem love the whole "mood" of it .... keep the poems coming |
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Re: 3:37 a.m.
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by Thespia on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 10:44:30 AM AEST
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| Cool poem, I dont usually get to sleep untill round 4 am either, even if i go to bed at 10! Lol, great poem!! |
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Re: 3:37 a.m.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 05:08:59 AM AEST
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| Actually you are a writer! Really liked your poem. Got the feeling just right |
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Re: 3:37 a.m.
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by missyboo on
Thursday, 18th October 2007 @ 12:30:31 AM AEST
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| nothing wrong with this poem to me great you should the cards of a player in the m section its my favorite rate it |
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Re: 3:37 a.m.
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by constantlyme on
Monday, 3rd March 2008 @ 03:30:51 AM AEST
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Beautifully written. I suffer from insomnia myself, could not have found a better way to express it.
"Sleep has never came easy to me,
These rampant thoughts keep plaguing me." - beautiful
Danielle |
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