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My Lover My Life
Contributed by
needledancing
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Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 02:09:53 PM in AEST
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To what force be mine that I direct on love.
A lover, A friend , a star above?
In my heart beats one passion. My Earth.
For failing to provide for me ,what is my worth?
I can't caress the whole of it, and yet it keeps me being.
I can't ignore the art of it, the wonder of its seeing.
In flesh we love and now aware of all selfish emotion.
What betrayal we deliver in our lack of our devotion.
Without the life force that is"us" as long as we are here.
If earth is not our loved one, we all have much to fear.
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needledancing
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Re: My Lover My Life
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 02:24:50 PM AEST
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absolutely!
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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Re: My Lover My Life
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 04:10:10 PM AEST
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How true and convincing... Wonderfully written.
FRANCO. . |
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Re: My Lover My Life
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 03:46:02 AM AEST
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I loved the pic to begin with how creative, human and earth at one together though it seems we arent as caring of our mother as we should be.
I loved the purity and force of this write, perfectly structured and full of wisdom.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: My Lover My Life
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 01:40:10 PM AEST
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My sentiments exactly. I absolutely love the picture.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: My Lover My Life
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 12:52:27 AM AEST
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You have created a beautfiul treasure of thruth here. Forever it should remain's in the psyche of every reader. I to wonder what has happend to a lot of gifts to this life we all have been given yet simply used and abused and then merely disguarded namely one of them being, each other. a work of divinity you have pened my friend.
Ben |
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Re: My Lover My Life
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 10:09:09 AM AEST
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| absolute write. love the pic in this. Vincent |
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Re: My Lover My Life
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by doug on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 10:12:40 AM AEST
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Loved the pic. Not as much as I loved
the poem though. I love poems that
just give you the truth. Something that
seems to lack everywhere else I look these
days for example tv , politcs , radio , asvertising etc etc..... The question is will
enough people accept this truth in time to
save Earth. Let's hope so. Thank you for
spreading this wonderful message. We need
more people like you. Truly , Doug |
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Re: My Lover My Life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 11:13:42 AM AEST
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ND, such extraordinary writing! The picture was such an exceptional
addition to your words, but WOW!! There is so much in these few
lines to soak into the skin and ponder. I wholly concur with every
fibre of my being!! This was incredible, right from the title on down
to the very last word. They poured over my heart in such a sad
but tremendous way.
You are so right. She is severly taken for granted. Such a
sad state of existence she is in now ... it all seems too
overwhelming, Thank you so much for sharing this one.
Damn poetic!!
~Breezy |
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