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Write on
Contributed by
ek_da_poet
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Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 11:06:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
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when i write on, adrenaline rush to my right arm
to place images on this paper, drawing out a flower
a white pedal daisy being plucked
to determine if it'll work or not
Painting a picture of us together, who i was kidding
like a portrait with no ink, only ghost white
when i try to be with you, excuse come along
a game of tag, with you not running
with me ending up, on a profile
talking to you through myspace was a waste
the beast you speak of, shouldnt be out in the open
they are usually caged in, studyed by scientists
like you i cant play with emotions
because im a human being
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Re: Write on
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by brew on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 12:07:47 PM AEST
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OMG.......i felt sadness from with in.i wanted to reach out and grab a hug and say AWS, Im sorry. Your in love.....are they? Find out.......dont give up.keep stuggling to the end.......
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Re: Write on
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by Thespia on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 11:29:46 AM AEST
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| What a lovely poem, speaks right to the heart! Honey, there is no right or wrong way to write a poem, each indivdual writes in their own way and as long as you write from your heart (like you have obviously done here) then your doing a wonderful job! Also, no one else should be able to tell you how YOUR poem should sound or be written, only you know when your happy with it. My poems are rubbish, I know that, but im content that ive finished each one to the best of my ability, trust in yourself! And keep writing as this poem is truly beautiful and very emotional! |
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