|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The First Half of a Journey is Arriving
Contributed by
TheSpiritx
on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 04:33:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
We met one clear, sunny day
Slightly windy, if I remember
An auspicious wind, to be sure
And you, with your hair tangled,
Cute in your own way
Said things so normal and natural -
A pleasant conversation
But it was the look, the mind
Behind the voice,
Drawing, alluring
Like a perfume fit for a queen.
You wore your beauty
At your wrists, drawing me in
A pleasure, a brilliance, a relationship
But Destiny intervened, noticing
That things were far too good
She said she didn't approve
And it was to be her way
So, with a fading of interest,
Almost fleeting,
The romance,
Fleeing, saying
"The first half of a journey is arriving."
A shell of awkward
Who-knows-its and
What-to-dos
Like another baby bird
On the ground below its nest
Our relationship
Chirped for love
And, neglected,
Died.
Copyright ©
TheSpiritx
... [
2007-05-30 16:33:02]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The First Half of a Journey is Arriving
(User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 02:00:02 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
a very powerful penned out write.. full of emotions and truths to alot of loves.. great job here
vampyress Jenni |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
