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An Anyomous Lover
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 07:14:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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why do your lips feel so good
when i kiss you on a date
why must i live without
knowing that i can you in my dreams
how can u treat me this way one day
but never show up on the next
i got to know
why must you be call
anyomous
i want to know who are you
who is this person who is so sweet to me
who is so kind to children in need
who is this lover i have been so crazy about
and searching for over 16 years of my life time
all i want to know is......will i meet you in reality or will you be another memorie of my mind?"
i got to know why do you have to be so mysterious and why do u have to be anyomous to me?
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2007-05-31 07:14:19]
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Re: An Anyomous Lover
(User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 10:35:10 AM AEST
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" will i meet you in reality or will you be another memorie of my mind?" what a beautiful line this is of yours . . . i love your style the way you use your words and yet also encorperate the context of the poem itself, i feel your sincerity in this poem along with your anticipation. what a lovely vibe you convey to the reader well at least this one why no commented on this is beyond me but i enjoyed it very much my friend. consider it a 5 star vote . take care . . .
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