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As We Say Good-Bye
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 09:24:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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Keep thinking about you
and that sweet young smile
Eyes looking into mine
man, it's been awhile
~~*wow, are you flirting?*
I've always been satisfied
with the one I've got
Lately his doings
put me sort of on the spot
~~*how could he do me this way?"
Now my mind is thinking
and wondering what to do
Never thought about another
then in walks you
~~*grins deviously*
Flirtatious look
you know you can't deny
Couldn't wait to hold one another
~~*can you squeeze me any tighter?*
as we said good-bye?
5-26-07
Filled with slight sarcasm, humor and a little wonder.....*laughs*
Laura Horner
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Re: As We Say Good-Bye
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 11:58:42 AM AEST
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wow a very creative write you have penned out.. well done
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Re: As We Say Good-Bye
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by brew on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 12:03:38 PM AEST
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Vivid images are put for this.I could see where you walk in and see another with them....You not saying a word, but if looks could Kill,they did,,,and thats the best part of it.You leave with smile upon face.....Great piece....I would have done the same.....LOL
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Re: As We Say Good-Bye
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 12:44:35 PM AEST
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well written.... I liked the intensity in it.
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Re: As We Say Good-Bye
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 01:44:42 PM AEST
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good to see you laughing again my sister hope all is well as can be expected nicely done as always . . .
Peace 2u my Sister Laura
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Re: As We Say Good-Bye
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by shelby on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 01:58:14 PM AEST
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mmmmmm I likes this maybe still got a little on your mind ey??
Good write
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Re: As We Say Good-Bye
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 02:06:55 PM AEST
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Very creative sister
and oh so refreshing to read.
great job
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