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Because you Asked
Contributed by
Dimes
on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 09:30:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I'm sick
I'm sick
Can't you see
I'm sick?
Have I been myself lately?
Do I seem
lethargic?
Why would I leave my friends
And wonder alone?
I'm sick
I'm sick
It's plain to see
I'm sick
Why do you think I keep writing
those two letters, fool?
I just want to curl up
and cry my heart out
Why does that suprise you,
my best friend?
You didn't think I could
feel this way?
You think I'm always cheery?
I'm sick
I'm sick
Can't you see
I'm sick?
Copyright ©
Dimes
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2007-05-31 09:30:57]
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Re: Because you Asked
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by brew on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 11:57:07 AM AEST
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Ok totally differ, yet are you really sick.or just sick of certain things?> We can get that way..I know I can. Liked it....lil open and kinda staggered, yet...Hey I am an un-bias opinion who writes out there..alot.
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Re: Because you Asked
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by Asthenia on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 03:35:12 PM AEST
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| Seems like you're writing about depression to me; this was a pretty good poem. It's open, raw, and honest...it just puts everything out there and that's how it should be...good job |
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Re: Because you Asked
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 05:46:27 AM AEST
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good poem. to me it speaks of depression or simply someone who's tired of everything and needs a break from it all. either way i've been there.
keep writing! |
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