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You and I
Contributed by
crow
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Saturday, 2nd June 2007 @ 10:39:05 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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On a clear black night
close my eyes
this thought goes out among the stars.
Wayward Hearts just like ours,
wonder why if they are wishing too.
Stars so bright on lovers nights
so many hands un-held.
Minute to late,minute to soon
damn this heart of mine.
Here We stand
stars un-fold
another given night.
Here We are You and I,
a thought apart...Vincent
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2007-06-02 10:39:05]
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Re: You and I
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by shelby on
Saturday, 2nd June 2007 @ 10:51:58 AM AEST
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Hun, a tender work of art you have painted here, reaching out to my heart from afar. I love this write!! Bravo!!
hugsssss
~Michelle~ |
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Re: You and I
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 2nd June 2007 @ 01:22:42 PM AEST
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Ooooo so very beautiful. I could feel the longing. I loved that last stanza and last couple of lines....
"Here We are You and I
a thought apart.."
Makes me want to cry. Excellent write.
Much peace and love,
Laura |
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Re: You and I
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 12:53:27 AM AEST
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Vincent, I echo the comments of Michelle and Laura here.
Wow. Such longing and hoping and wishing with the most
gloriously beautiful backdrop a poet could imagine.
This write was like a soft touch, warming the forgotten
embers of our hearts. Stunning, my friend.
~Breezy |
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Re: You and I
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by Oceandreamer on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 01:06:19 AM AEST
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| I love the way you rapped it up..."A thought apart.. " Brilliant!! ~~Oceandreamer~~ |
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Re: You and I
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by needledancing on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 01:46:21 PM AEST
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| A wonderful write. Filled with longing of the simple pleasure of sharing the togetherness of each moment. |
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Re: You and I
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 10:32:58 AM AEST
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I agree with Michelle and Breezy on this one.
awsome write |
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Re: You and I
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 11:51:41 AM AEST
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awww.... so full of longing, a hearts deep wish, beautiful write,
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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Re: You and I
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 05:53:22 PM AEST
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Awe inspiring work of art.
I know that feeling.
big smiles, huggs,
emy |
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