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The Crow
Contributed by
Oceandreamer
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Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 06:56:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Black Crow, you bird of night When all ells falls, you take flight. Day gives way to moon, swallowing the evening sun Everything covered in darkness, beauty tainted in grey. In the darkest hour, calling upon heavens thunder... sending all to plunder. Theres nothing left, but a distant memory, as beauty fades, under your pitch black faade. Darkness... Black Crow, you bird of night... there is no truth within your flight. Evil forces and fallen light, brightest light, darkest night. A shattered world beyond repair, lost in the sands of forever. Time has fallen from grace No minutes, no seconds, no hours, only time...
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2007-06-03 06:56:30]
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Re: The Crow
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by Honey56 on
Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 09:33:16 AM AEST
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Very nice write..
Excellent! |
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Re: The Crow
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 11:11:28 PM AEST
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Good grief, man! What a myriad of darkness dwells here!
And there is so much left up to the reader's interpretation,
(I like that!). Crows are such peculiar birds, but yes, they
definitely have that dark mystery about them. and wow! You've
gone beyond that mystery and created an exceptionally
eerie and somber write. Great job!
~Breezy |
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