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One Rainy Night
Contributed by
FRANCO
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Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 01:56:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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A long slashing rainy night, my lone wretched heart
drummed aimlessly, as my eyes gazed at the murky
horizon, filled with empty thoughts, searching
seriously for nothing - yet searching.
I heard a clatter and a feeble weeping
from the door; alas! A visitor? queried
my mind within, dragging my slothful legs to open
the door; amazed to see her standing before.
Drenched to her tender bones - stared at me
with those dreamy pair of eyes;
articulating volumes within my
purposeless mind and heart.
Timorously walked into my wet chalet,
yet her eyes fixed gently on me,
perhaps probing to read my thoughts.
I offered all that I had to slake her hunger.
She In return stood gazing lovingly
wagging her tiny tail; like a lost puppy that she was.
-FRANCO-
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2007-06-03 13:56:45]
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Re: One Rainy Night
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 02:05:41 PM AEST
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You had me going on this one.
Luved it!
Great work of art.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: One Rainy Night
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 11:26:03 PM AEST
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Oh Franco! You bad boy you! lol
You are so good at these writes! What a wonderful story
this was too. Tender and beautifully sweet.
Excellent, my friend. A pure tale, (tail?lol) of innocence.
Just lovely!
~Breezy |
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Re: One Rainy Night
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 02:56:04 PM AEST
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| You are certainly getting us going on these last line identification pieces...I fell for it again. Trully adorable with its completed definition. I love this style you've been presenting. |
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Re: One Rainy Night
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by Tot on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 09:00:25 AM AEST
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| I thought you were going somewhere else with that:) I liked it a lot though.~Tot |
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Re: One Rainy Night
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 12:05:05 PM AEST
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adorable:) beautifully written,
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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Re: One Rainy Night
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by Dom on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 03:19:55 AM AEST
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I fell for this just like everyone who read this, really had me thinking!
A very sweet poem!
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: One Rainy Night
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 03:49:30 PM AEST
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This counts as a 2fer...two for one, that is... Because, I enjoyed this so much I shared it w/ a girlfriend, an animal lovin' individual if ever there was one & you melted her heart...although, I'd have to say the surprise ending counts for a good part of my own enjoyment!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace
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Re: One Rainy Night
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by brew on
Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 12:45:52 PM AEST
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Awsssssssss. I have my unconditional love too......His name is Copper.........Cant they be that? No other is dear nor true.........ALWAYS.......and Im sorry she ran away........or got out. Mine did too the other nite.,but I found him. Great write about the most compreable friend..ever!!!!!!!!!
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Brew~ |
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