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Bleeding Black
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 03:49:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My heart is bleeding
pouring blackness down my feet
In these waning hours of early morn
seeking... but never finding any sleep
Loneliness abounds
so thick a knife couldn't pierce
Clouds of pain succumb me
suffocating me with something fierce
Like a disease which has sought me out
one that seems to have no cure
It seeps into the souls of thee
whose heart was once so pure
The blackened blood surrounds
swallowing me in serum thick
No longer can I see the surface
no longer do I hear the clock tick
Death it has overcome me
internally eaten... leaving this shell
Hollowness is what I walk with
in this heart and mind of hell
5-30-07
Laura Horner
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Re: Bleeding Black
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 07:56:38 PM AEST
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I don't have a clue what brought this on but I pray you are o.k.
Very sad but great writing.
huggs, luv, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Bleeding Black
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 11:16:53 PM AEST
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Oh sweetie!! This was so heart wrenching!
I am happy to see you pouring your heart out onto the paper, sis. It is
good for the soul .. and my GOD! what incredible things you have
to say.
This struck me .. in the most painfully beautiful way. I am aching
for your suffering, but I am so entirely impressed with your work.
Exceptional writing, from an exceptional woman and poet!
love and peace,
~MG
[who is extremely glad to call you friend. :)] |
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Re: Bleeding Black
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by Oceandreamer on
Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 11:32:19 PM AEST
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| Very Dark,intense and all consuming.Raw emotions.Life and death...You managed to draw the reader into a whirl of darkness.Very well expressed.Great write ! |
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Re: Bleeding Black
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by shelby on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 10:48:01 AM AEST
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this is so heart breaking, keep pouring onto the pages sis...... love ya
Michelle |
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Re: Bleeding Black
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 09:07:42 AM AEST
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| I agree so much with my fellow poets, get it all out,..then you heal. excellent dark write. Vincent |
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Re: Bleeding Black
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 12:11:50 PM AEST
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raw heartfelt chilling reality, one cannot help but feel a pang to the heart,
big love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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