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Dumb Blonde, Funny Bunny
Contributed by
spike
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Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 11:48:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Come follow Alice down the rabbit-hole,
and find out what the sweet lass stole
hearts and minds and precious things,
and silly thoughts on griphyons wings.
Come trace her steps along the path,
and revel in the aftermath
of all the little vixens deeds,
chaos springing up like weeds
Howd she ever get so big?
only swilling like a pig;
why then is she now so small
you mean so little, after all
Alice, my sweet ingenue,
life parodies art, thats true
this fickle world can be so crass,
keep dreaming through the looking glass.
Copyright ©
spike
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2007-06-03 23:48:24]
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Re: Dumb Blonde, Funny Bunny
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 12:22:15 AM AEST
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A very lovely write...
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Re: Dumb Blonde, Funny Bunny
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 02:11:07 AM AEST
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Spike,
This was cool. I love how you used Alice. Your metaphorical use was splendid! A bit of lovely sarcasm. Nicely penned.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Dumb Blonde, Funny Bunny
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by emystar on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 03:57:22 PM AEST
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Exellent work of art.
Incredibly written.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Dumb Blonde, Funny Bunny
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by Dom on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 11:50:24 PM AEST
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I'm agreeing with Laura here, a most outstanding metaphorical poem! It sounds wonderful read aloud,
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: Dumb Blonde, Funny Bunny
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 12:50:20 AM AEST
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As long as there is a breath left in them ... they'll be made to regret it.
(Incidentally, female celebs aren't the only targets .. but that's
neither here nor there)
humans! Who needs em, right? lol We just LOVE to see those we
envy, suffer! 'Tis a sad truth ... I really detest the damn trash mags
that line the checkouts in the super markets. And it boils my blood
that there exist those who actually BELIEVE all that garbage!
Loved the write, man. I, too loved how you used Alice. (One
of my favourite stories)
peace, S.
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Re: Dumb Blonde, Funny Bunny
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by Keilantra on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 05:23:22 AM AEST
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can't quite place what i loved so much about it but the rhyme and meter was great, and so were the words. fabulous imagery. you took this old idea and turned it inot something totally your own. great, as usual.
xXx
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