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Little Ms.Sallie Sue
Contributed by
honey56
on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 08:10:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Little Ms.Sallie Sue wish upon
A star..
She wished her spirit could
Ride upon the wind..
She opened her eyes amidst the
Clouds
Her heart was lighten with perfect
Perfection
Her soul was all aglow
When her only wish had been
Granted..
Her wings were of a golden tip
As she sailed within the wind
The clouds were her refugee
The wind was her home
The sun gave her great joy as
She rest upon the clouds..
The moon was her compass to
Guide her from place to place
The stars hung around to
Welcome her into heaven
Because her soul shined so bright
She earned the right to call the
Wind her home..
Copyright ©
honey56
... [
2007-06-04 08:10:21]
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Re: Little Ms.Sallie Sue
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 10:30:34 AM AEST
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She earned the right to call the Wind her home.. What a stunning line this is. and paint's such a vivid and delicate picture.
truly a work of poetic work of art. You are a literary seamtress . . .
Ben
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Re: Little Ms.Sallie Sue
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 09:47:35 AM AEST
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| It is always a pleasure to come read your work...what a breath of freshness it is.. Vincent |
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Re: Little Ms.Sallie Sue
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by Dom on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 05:11:00 PM AEST
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Lovely poem, I think many people (certainly myself included) experience such soaring feelings that you really do feel you are floating or flying above everybody else.
Very well written,
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