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DADDY, IT'S YOUR DAY
Contributed by
emystar
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Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 04:59:46 PM in AEST
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The home my Dad built and I grew up in. The veiw from my office window.
As my angel you're always around.
Jus one mile from Star City town.
You taught me to wash troubles away
with dirty hands wash um down drain, hey.
Daddy it's your day
Going out side to play.
Daddy it's your day.
Come out let's go play.
No closer to God can one be
Planting seeds in dirt, see?
We'll reap a bountifull crop
To sustain when tempature drops.
We can survive on this land
Blessed by God's own hand.
When life tumbles round-n-round
Here at Zandua inner peace abounds.
Happy, happy heavenly Fathers day.
Yobrat,
emy
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emystar
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Re: DADDY, IT'S YOUR DAY
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by Bruce on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 06:39:58 PM AEST
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| Great Emy, Daddy will love it |
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Re: DADDY, IT'S YOUR DAY
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by madhusudan on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 11:48:02 PM AEST
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| Hey, hmm i wish i could write somethin like this for my dad too...very nice...and thanks about your comments...ill remember it... |
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 02:02:06 AM AEST
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Emy,
thanks for sharing the pic and this beautiful write. Tenderness and love shine in this write. He is looking down right now with a smile.
hugs
Michelle |
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 02:41:22 AM AEST
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Emy, I loved the picture and your poem. Your dad is surely smiling down upon you. (or maybe right there over your shoulder)
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: DADDY, IT'S YOUR DAY
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 10:31:41 AM AEST
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Love the pic and the poem.
hugs |
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 10:42:18 AM AEST
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| no matter what in the world" dad`s have their little girls hearts always..wonderful read. Vincent |
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Re: DADDY, IT'S YOUR DAY
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 02:49:44 PM AEST
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| Wonderful tribute to your Dad he will smile and shine bright on his day. Well done. |
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Re: DADDY, IT'S YOUR DAY
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 03:07:48 AM AEST
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omigosh, emy, this made me smile LARGE, girl!!
What a wonderful sentiment here. The picture, coupled with
your glorious words makes a beauty that cannot be denied!!
There is so much warmth in here, that I want to linger within its
rapture all day ... and that ending, "Yobrat" God, I LOVE that!! lol
peace and love
to you, my friend,
~Breezy |
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Re: DADDY, IT'S YOUR DAY
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 12:49:55 AM AEST
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You always write the most considerable poetry emy and so beautiful is this one another treasure of the heart. Looove that little house. nicely done once again . Another
priceless emystar . . .
((((emystar))))
Ben |
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Re: DADDY, IT'S YOUR DAY
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 11:02:40 PM AEST
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| Another beautiful tribute, I loved my dad so much and always think about him every day especially birthdays and Fathers day.. The house is beautiful emmy your dad was a clever man..... xxx |
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th June 2007 @ 07:53:04 AM AEST
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| This is a very nice poem. I hope he loved it! |
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Re: DADDY, IT'S YOUR DAY
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by MemeCaroline on
Saturday, 12th January 2008 @ 02:40:49 AM AEST
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| I love it. So very touching. |
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Re: DADDY, IT'S YOUR DAY
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by kaycas on
Saturday, 12th January 2008 @ 02:51:11 AM AEST
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Such sweet lyrics, have you had anything recorded yet? If not I think you should have, you put the words together so well with a lot of emotion.
Kay XO |
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