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Love Is Where You Are
Contributed by
bruce
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Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 06:37:50 PM in AEST
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Love Is Where You Are
As you glance up above
you know,
Love is where you are
There before your eyes
the most beautiful, shinning star
The two of you, just sitting there
feeling the warmth, from each others hand
A gentle breeze, is blowing
as the sea flows, across the sand
Love is where you are
you feel it in your heart
You know, what the two of you have
and you never, want to be apart
You had thought about it often
would it happen, once again
You now know for sure
and exactly, where and when
How wonderful, is this feeling
that has set you all aglow
Anyone who looks at you
they will surely know
That you were blessed once again
and love is where you are
As you look up above
By that beautiful shinning star
Copyright ©
bruce
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2007-06-04 18:37:50]
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Re: Love Is Where You Are
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by emystar on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 08:20:03 PM AEST
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I don't knoiw who this is for but it's beautifull.
huggs, smiles,
emy
awesome writing. |
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Re: Love Is Where You Are
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by Dom on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 11:42:10 PM AEST
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Very sweet, I particularly liked the second stanza.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: Love Is Where You Are
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 03:24:26 AM AEST
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Bruce,
once again you set hearts to flutter with another pretty write. I hope that shining star is ever near you my friend.
Michelle |
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Re: Love Is Where You Are
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 02:57:41 AM AEST
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Oh my Bruce ... how beautiful and inspiring! I adore how you
married the first and last stanzas. It makes what lay in between
so much more delightful. Like the tasty middle!
Your romantic writes are always so entirely heart-stirring and
warm. But this one, my dear friend, has to be one of my MOST
favourites!
well done, Bruce! Very well done indeed!!
*sigh sigh sigh*
~Breezy |
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Re: Love Is Where You Are
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 11:49:06 AM AEST
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beautiful and sweet, written for someone close to you it seems, very lovely:)
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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