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a twist of an outcome
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 07:55:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Laying naked on the bedroom floor
stripped down to the core
what is beneath the bone?
Looking inside I found all the secrets
you dare to hide
Don't fight the feeling
you know it's there
you hear the faint melody in your ears
Presenting the bare soul
..wide open..
I take all control
coming inside... all through... within
Your Angel I am
protecting you from bad things
to ever rise again....
Take my hand
I'll lead you home... home inside of me
Vampyress Jenni
Copyright ©
Phantomvampyress
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2007-06-06 07:55:49]
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Re: a twist of an outcome
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 12:43:13 PM AEST
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wow Jen,
up and down and super! I sure love your ideas hun beautiful write
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Re: a twist of an outcome
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 02:39:55 PM AEST
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Lovely flow and narration, deeply sensitvie and an air of warmth and compassion. a most lovely peice of writting in your usual jenni manner.
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Re: a twist of an outcome
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 01:34:21 AM AEST
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This was amazing. The ups and downs were brillantly written. Full of emotions.. Well done.
Take care
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Re: a twist of an outcome
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by AirHead on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 02:49:18 AM AEST
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Your Angel I am
protecting you from bad things
to ever rise again....
Especially liked this line..... |
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Re: a twist of an outcome
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 06:14:43 AM AEST
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Jenni, such a beautiful expression of love and loyalty.
There is a strong, yet soft conviction in your words.
Completely beautiful ~
~Breezy |
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Re: a twist of an outcome
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by Oceandreamer on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 06:36:08 AM AEST
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| Lovley write! Devoted love from a place deep inside.Well expressed. ~~Oceandreamer~~ |
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